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Unknown tribe were found In the heart of Amazon Basin two big, recently constructed huts were photographed from a plane. Brazilian government declared that these picteres bear out the subsistance of a tribe which is unknown for us. Even though no member of tribe was photographed, there are multitude traces they are in residence and active. They were so frightened by the plane that escaped in the jungle. It is amazing that in the world there is people, who live outside the modern civilization. And I think it is better leave them in peace. How do you think?

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Unknown tribe were found. (Strictly this should be tribe WAS found; tribe is a collective noun, but this is such a common error that it is becoming acceptable.

In the heart of THE Amazon Basin two big, recently constructed huts were photographed from a plane. THE Brazilian government declared that these pictUres SHOW (bear ou)t the EXISTENCE (subsistance) of a tribe which is unknown TO us. Even though no member of tribe was photographed, there IS A multitude OF traces THAT they are in residence and active. They were so frightened by the plane that THEY escaped in the jungle. It is amazing that in the world there ARE people, who live outside     modern civilization. And I think it is better TO leave them in peace. WHAT do you think?

To 'bear out' is to confirm something already suspected.

Although the tribe may be living at 'subsistance level' (Very basic, only just able to survive) you cannot say 'it showed the subsistance of...'

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these picteres>these pictures and yes it sounds better to leave them alone:)

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