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What do you think about my English? The correlation between the changes of the annual and seasonal Ob river runoff and the main climatic characteristics is considered. For study climate characteristics and their impact on the river runoff the catchment area was divided into 4 private river basins of the Ob river system: Tobol, Ishim, Irtysh, upper and middle Ob. The analysis of the significance of correlations of Ob river runoff volumes with the amount of precipitation and temperatures in the territories of private basins is performed. The features of the influence of climate characteristics of the parts of Ob catchment area on the runoff in the lower flow of the river are determined. It is proving that the water content of the year is determined primarily by the water content of the warm half-year. River runoff in the warm half of the year is formed mainly by snow accumulated in the catchment area in winter, and liquid precipitation for the warm half-year. Local zones of influence of solid precipitation on the lower Ob river runoff during the warm half-year were determined. The most significant for the runoff during warm half-year is amount of solid precipitation into the Tobol and upper and middle Ob basins. A significant part of the years of extremely high water content for the Ob river can be explained by the coincidence of the maximum solid precipitation in these basins. In the cold half-year, solid precipitation that falls the catchment area are not participate in the formation of runoff. An increase in the number of winter thaws was observed on the territories of all the river basins. It contributes to partial snow melting in the cold half-year and leading to an increase in winter water content. In General, the Ob river runoff during the warm half of the year has a closer relationship with climate characteristics than the runoff during cold half of the year.

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The correlation between the changes of the annual and seasonal Ob river runoff and the main climatic characteristics were considered. To study climate characteristics and their impact on the river runoff the catchment area was divided into 4 private separate river basins of the Ob river system: Tobol, Ishim, Irtysh, upper and middle Ob. An analysis of the significance of correlations of the Ob river runoff volumes with the amount of precipitation and temperatures in the territories of the private separate basins was performed. The features of the influence of climate characteristics of the parts of the Ob catchment area on the runoff in the lower flow of the river was determined.
It was proved that the water content for the year is determined primarily by the water content for the warmer six months of the year. half-year River runoff in the warmer half of the year is formed mainly by snow accumulated in the catchment areas in winter, and liquid precipitation for the warmer half of the year. It was determined that local zones of influence of solid precipitation on the lower Ob river created runoff during the warmer six months of the year were determined. The most significant influence for the runoff during the warmer half of the year was the amount of solid precipitation into the Tobol and upper and middle Ob basins. A significant part of the year's of extremely high water content for the Ob river can be explained by the coincidence occurrence of the maximum solid precipitation (you can use the word rain instead here. It is more natural ) in these basins.
In the colder half of the year rain that falls in the catchment area are does not participate in the formation of runoff. An increase in the number of winter thaws was observed in the territories area of all the river basins. It contributed to partial snow melting in the colder six months, and led to an increase in the winter water content.
In General, the Ob river runoff during the warmer half of the year has a closer relationship with climate characteristics than the runoff during colder half of the year.

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