Search from various English teachers...
Japan flagToko
My trip to Australia I’ve been to Australia 5 times. Last trip, I stayed in Melbourne for 2 months where my auntie lives in by myself. My auntie works as music teacher in Melbourne. I explored city and ate many sweets. Actually I ate cakes every day. Some times I hangout with my friends. I went south part of Melbourne by train with deaf friends. I learned some Australian hand signs. They can conversation even in noisy train or in some distance. That is great skill I think. I really wanna learn it too and conversation with them smoothly. I spent great time in Melbourne even more I wrote. I hope I can go there as Working Holiday in the future.

Corrections · 6

2
My trip to Australia

I’ve been to Australia 5 times.
Last trip, I stayed in Melbourne, where my auntie lives, for 2 months where my auntie lives in by myself. (I changed the word order to make it sound more natural).
My auntie works as music teacher in Melbourne.
I explored the city and ate many sweets.
Actually, I ate cakes every day.
Some times I hangout hung out with my friends.
I went to the south part of Melbourne by train with deaf friends. I learned some Australian hand signs.
They can have a conversation even in a noisy train or in some distance far away. That is great skill I think.
I really wanna (want to) learn it too and have a conversation with them smoothly (even though we say it in speech, we never write "wanna," even in informal texts like this one).
I spent had a great time in Melbourne even more I wrote (do you mean you did many things in Melbourne that you didn't get to describe in this notebook entry?).
I hope I can go there as on a Wworking Hholiday in the future.
0
Hi Toko, I agree with Dylan and Darcy. Wanna, gonna, gotta are all slang. I never use them in my informal texts even to my friends and my family. If you are learning English, I would discourage you from using them. Just say "want to", "going to", "got to." Glad you enjoyed your stay in Melbourne. I was going to correct your essay but Dylan beat me to it. :)
0
Hmm good point, I guess you could say "wanna" in an SMS with friends

Want to progress faster?

Join this learning community and try out free exercises!

Don’t miss out on the opportunity to learn a language from the comfort of your own home. Browse our selection of experienced language tutors and enroll in your first lesson now!

Start Learning Today