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A story I made Crying heavily, a girl gets on a cab. Her name is Mai. A middle-aged driver asks her what happened to her. She reveals that she saw her boy friend having a date with a girl she didn’t know. The driver starts to tell his story to encourage her. He used to cheat on his wife again and again. However, his wife never left him. After his first child was born, he changed in a good way because a sense of responsibility as a father arose in him. So he tells her that people can change as time passes. Mai’s phone suddenly starts to ring. This is from her boyfriend and he apologizes to her for what he did. She turns on the speaker by mistake, so that the driver hears her boyfriend’s voice. He notices the boyfriend is his son. He realizes blood will tell, apologizing her in his mind.

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A story I made

Crying heavily, a girl gets on in/into a cab. Her name is Mai. A The middle-aged driver asks her what happened to her. She reveals that she saw her boyfriend having a date with a girl she didn’t know.
The driver starts to tell his story to encourage her. He used to cheat on his wife again and again. However, his wife never left him. After his first child was born, he changed in a good way because a sense of responsibility as a father arose in him. So he tells her that people can change as time passes.
Mai’s phone suddenly starts to ring. This The call is from her boyfriend and he apologizes to her for what he did. She turns on the speaker by mistake, so that the driver hears her boyfriend’s voice. He notices realises the boyfriend is his son.
He realizes blood will tell, apologizing to her in his mind.

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