JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON January 26st
I would like someone to correct my diary (or to tell me the natural way of saying some things below. But I would be happy even if you JUST CORRECT my entry). Here, I might write in spoken English, possibly, because I want to improve not just my writing skills, but also the skill of spoken English. Could you do that for me, please?
JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON January 26st
The day when if we get a transfer order from my boss or not is sneaking up to us. Acutally I don't want to move other place from my place in my job because I am really excited now in my area. I don't know if I do this or not, but my boss has kept to say me about my transfer order. " You are going to get a trasfer order and more, it is not just the order it might be the order with house-moving." my boss said to me every day. For me, the transfer order is not for me, that mean, I do work in my current place for only one year, then I am thinking that this length is really short for most business workers. The periodic transfer order is seem to be for getting lots of experiences, but I am thinking the one year since we have started work is the time when we got used to do work. From then, we can finally make highof work reputation from everyone. That's why I want to do work more in current place, at least I want to do one year more from now.
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JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON January 26st
I would like someone to correct my diary (or to tell me the natural way of saying some things below. But I would be happy even if you JUST CORRECT my entry). Here, I might write in spoken English, possibly, because I want to improve not just my writing skills, but also the skill of spoken English. Could you do that for me, please?
JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON January 26st
The day that we may get a transfer order from our boss is coming. I don't want to move from where I am because I really like the area that I am in now. I don't know if I will have to transfer or not, but my boss keeps mentioning a transfer order. He said "you are going to receive a transfer order that includes relocating". He brings the transfer order up everyday. I have only worked at my current job location for one year and I do not want a transfer order and feel it is to soon to relocate for most employees in my business. The periodic transfer seems to be a way for employees to gain a lot of experience, but I think it has taken a least one year to learn to do my job. After a year we can finally provide a reputable work from everyone. This is why I want to work for at least one more year at my current location.
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I have tried to correct your paragraph and make it sound more natural. I'm sure my corrections are not perfect but I hope they are helpful. Good luck with not getting a job transfer!
The day that we may get a transfer order from our boss is coming. I don't want to move from where I am because I really like the area that I am in now. I don't know if I will have to transfer or not, but my boss keeps mentioning a transfer order. He said "you are going to receive a transfer order that includes relocating". He brings the transfer order up everyday. I have only worked at my current job location for one year and I do not want a transfer order and feel it is to soon to relocate for most employees in my business. The periodic transfer seems to be a way for employees to gain a lot of experience, but I think it has taken a least one year to learn to do my job. After a year we can finally provide a reputable work from everyone. This is why I want to work for at least one more year at my current location.
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