The pure love
A true love it's something miracle to happen in your life, some People are lucky to find it and other they don't they live in darkness and sadness in all live.
It's a huge contradiction, because you must choose carefully your love with specific attributs it's not easy but it's possible to find your soul.
P. S
If you don't know how you can love yourself you can't offer it.
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The pure love
It's a huge contradiction, because you must choose carefully your love with specific attributes. It's not easy but it's possible to find your soul.
P. S
If you don't know how you can love yourself, you can't offer it.
The biggest problem I see is run on sentence construction or comma splice use.
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The pure love
A true love is something miraculous to happen in your life. Some people are lucky to find it and others don't. They live in darkness and sadness their whole life.
It's a huge contradiction, because you must choose your love carefully, with specific attributes. It's not easy, but it's possible to find your soul.
P. S
If you don't know how to love yourself, you can't offer it.
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The pure love
A true love it's is something a miracle to happening in your life. Some People are lucky to find it and others they don't aren't. They live in darkness and sadness in all throughout their lives.
It's a huge contradiction, because you must choose your love carefully your love. Searching for someone with specific attributs it's is not easy but it's possible to find your soulmate.
P. S
If you don't know how you can to love yourself, you can't offer it.
(You need to know when to use 'it's' and 'is'. You keep mixing them. Need to know where to put commas and periods in sentences. Just work on grammar a little bit. Other then that, you're not too bad)
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The pure love
A true love is a miracle if it happens in your life. Some people are lucky enough to find it and others don't so they live in darkness and sadness in all their lives/all their life.
It's a huge contradiction, because you must choose your love carefully - you look for specific attributes - it's not easy but it's possible to find your soul-mate.
P. S If you don't love yourself you can't love anyone else.
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A true love is something miraculous to happen in your life. Some people are lucky to find it and others don't. They live in darkness and sadness their whole life.
It's a huge contradiction, because you must choose your love carefully, with specific attributes. It's not easy, but it's possible to find your soul.
P. S
If you don't know how to love yourself, you can't offer it.
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