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An email for my penfriend Dear Jimm My new school is wonderful. My classmates are very friendly and my teachers are very patient. They often help me when I'm in trouble. My new school is very big and beautiful, it has a garden with many flowers. In this school, everyone is friendly. My favorite subjects is Maths. Although it is very difficult, I still like it and think it is very interesting. I have many friends in this school. Max is my best friend. He is good at English, Chinese and Maths. He is study hard, and his academic record is the best in my class. I want to study like him. What about your new school? Please write to me soon. Yours, Jimmy

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An email for my penfriend

Dear Jimm
My new school is wonderful. My classmates are very friendly and my teachers are very patient. They often help me when I'm in trouble. My new school is very big and beautiful, it has a garden with many flowers. In this school, everyone is friendly. My favorite subjects is Maths. Although it is very difficult, I still like it and think it is very interesting. I have many friends in this school. Max is my best friend. He is good at English, Chinese and Maths. He studies is study hard, and his academic record is the best in my class. I want to study like him. What about your new school?
Please write to me soon.
Yours,
Jimmy

Very well written, I found only one mistake.
Kind regards, Miss Lien.
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请帮我修改谢谢

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