Every Household Has Its Own Problem
Chinese New Year is coming, right on this Saturday. My second elder sister came back home yesterday and my first elder sister arrived home too this morning. However, I don't feel any excitement or happiness this time. When I think of it, I am a bit sad and want to tear. But I know my parents are the happiest, they had looked forward to their kids' arrival and then celebrating new year together. It's the only chance that all the family members can get together. My dad began to make bed for my sister already in the morning yesterday to welcome his daughter's coming back home so that she can just lay on her bed comfortably when she arrives home and if she wants to rest.
What's on my mind is so many things changed in a year and they sucked. And a year is going to past.
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Every Household Has Its Own Problem
Chinese New Year is coming, right on this Saturday. My second elder oldest sister came back home yesterday and my first elder oldest sister arrived home too this morning. However, I don't feel any excitement or happiness this time. When I think of it, I am a bit sad and want to tear cry. But I know my parents are the happiest very happy, they had looked forward to their kids' arrival and then celebrating new year together. It's the only chance that all the entire family members can get together. My dad began to makemade the bed for my sister already in the morning yesterday morning to welcome his daughter's[1] coming back homeand so that she can just laylie[2] on her bed comfortably when she arrives home and if she wants to rest when she arrives home.
What's on my mind is that so many things changed in a this past year and they all sucked. And another year is going to past has gone by.
[1] 'daughter's' implies something belongs to them. No apostrophe here.
[2] objects 'lay', people 'lie'
My edits are a bit heavy handed because I was editing for clarity. You did a great job and I hope this new year brings you lots of prosperity and happiness.
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