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Completely Exhausted As the title... Okay,anyway this is not a real "composition"...So,I guess I don't need to follow the rule. Today I still had to go to my lab,and do some affairs there. However, there is too many stuffs that cannot be done in one day, especially only by myself.Therefore,when I finally took a little break in my leisure time, I figured out that the sky became dark.Although I told my classmates I'm so exhausted that I was dying and wanted to go back my dorm,they just patted on my shoulder and said "God bless you." : ( Nevertheless, I've done all the jobs that I have to do! (Except learning my professional knowledge and English) :P Come on! I'm too tired....

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To know anything want to have to pay, so now pay means you closer to success, come on! YA YA I believe that you can be done! If feel stuffy, do you have a time to find my, I think I can share my life with you on the many, of course, if you are willing to hear!
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take a break !
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Are you studying to be a doctor?
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Completely Exhausted

As the title...
Okay,anyway this is not a real "composition"...So,I guess I don't need to follow the rule.
Today I still had to go to my lab,and do some affairs there.


However, there is too many so much stuffs that cannot be done in one day, especially only by myself.Therefore,wWhen I finally took a little short break in my leisure time [implied that breaks are taken during leisure time, so no need to repeat the image],.  I figured found out that the sky became it was already dark outside [or say "night had fallen/came"].  .Although I told my classmates I'm was so exhausted that I was dying and wanted to go back my dorm,.  tThey just patted on my shoulder and said "God bless you." : (

Nevertheless, I've done all the jobs that I have to do!
(Except learning my professional knowledge and English) :P

Come on! I'm too tired....

 

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