My new pet
Last november my sister give me a dog. I called Kaiser, it is very cute and funny. It was born at september 10th and it is 4 months old now. I enjoy playing with it, i make a toy with a pice of cotton and it play to bite. Realy I love my dog!
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My new pet
Last Novermber my sister gave me a dog. I call it Kaiser,( I named it) it is very cute and funny. It was born on September 10th and it is 4 months old now. I enjoy playing with it. I made a toy with a piece of cotton and it plays with it by biting it. I really love my dog!
I call it Kaiser,( I named it)
I changed this to the present tense, call, because you still have the dog and you still call it Kaiser.
I would use the past tense , named, to indicate that you gave the dog a name when you received it from your sister .
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My new pet
Last november my sister gAVE me a dog. I called iT Kaiser, it is very cute and funny. It was born ON september THE 10th and it is 4 months old now. I enjoy playing with it. i maDE a toy with a piECE of cotton and he bites it to play with it. I really love my dog!
great post! Only a few errors - otherwise very good!
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