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Are there any mistakes? Nowadays the vast majority of people choose shopping in the internet instead of shopping in traditional physical stores. Online shopping can save huge amount of time for customer. However, sometimes failures of delivery service may lead to wrong size or wrong colour of purchase. Shopping in the internet takes less time than shopping in the physical store. Customer doesn’t spend time making his way to the store through a traffic jam and doesn’t waste time in the queue to fitting room. Moreover, there is no need to search for the right thing among thousands other things by hand. It takes just a few minutes to open website, filter, choose something and pay for it. For example, a recent survey by Amazon found that customers spent no more than 10 minutes for average purchase. Nonetheless, customers face with incorrect delivery occasionally. Sometimes people get their purchase with wrong size or wrong color. Furthermore, delivery service can bring even wrong order for customer. In this case buyer has to return his purchase and wait for a new delivery or for returning of money. It takes some time and usually customer should also make several calls or write a letter to support service. For instance, almost fourth part of all purchases in the internet has problems listed below and about half of this part ends with return. Most people tend to shop online rather than offline. Shopping in the internet is very quick process. But mistakes of delivery service can be cause of wrong parameters of purchase.

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Are there any mistakes?

Nowadays, the vast majority of people choose shopping in to shop on the Internet instead of shopping in at traditional physical stores. Online shopping can save a huge amount of time for the customer. However, sometimes failures on the part of the delivery service (better to say : fulfilment service) may lead to the wrong size or wrong colour of purchase being sent to the customer.

Shopping in on the Internet takes less time than shopping in the at a physical store. Customers don't have to doesn’t spend time making his or her way to the store through a traffic jam and doesn’t don't have to waste time in the queue to the fitting room. Moreover, there is no need to search for the right thing among thousands of other things by hand. It takes just a few minutes to open a website, filter, choose something and pay for it. For example, a recent survey by Amazon found that customers spent no more than 10 minutes for the average purchase.

Nonetheless, customers are faced with incorrect fulfilment and delivery occasionally. Sometimes people get their purchase with in the wrong size or wrong color. Furthermore, fulfilment and delivery services can bring even wrong even bring an entirely incorrect order for to the customer. In this case, the buyer has to return his purchase and wait for a new delivery or for returning of money wait for a refund. It takes some time and usually the customer should also has to make several calls or write a letter to the customer support service. For instance, almost fourth part a quarter of all purchases in on the Internet has problems listed below (you mean above ?) and about half of this part ends with a return.

Most More (see below) people [nowadays] tend to shop online rather than offline. Shopping in on the internet is very quick process. But mistakes of on the part of the fulfilment and delivery services can be a cause of wrong parameters of purchase being delivered. (grammatically okay but we would not normally say it like that. Better to say : ... cause of incorrect purchase options, features or colors being sent to the customer. )

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-Internet always uppercase I.

-Delivery service only covers the delivery part. Fulfilment service covers the warehousing, picking the items from the warehouse and delivering to the customer. This is a more complete term.

-1/4 = a quarter or one quarter. 3/4 = three quarters.

-sometimes you use American spelling (color) and sometimes you use UK/Australia spelling (colour). Must choose one and be consistent

-Most people do this
-More people do this rather than that.
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can be cause BY wrong parameters of purchase
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All times i bought online i wrong

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