An beautiful view
Today I was in my new flat and making a renovation. There are a lot of snow outside and I decided to make a picture. You can see a private sector from height of 17th floor. There are a lot of high buildings in Moscow and towns lying beside Moscow.
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An beautiful view
Today I was in my new flat and making a renovation. There is a lot of snow outside and I decided to make a picture. You can see a private sector from a height of 17th floors. There are a lot of high buildings in Moscow and towns lying beside Moscow.
Not bad! Just two extra points: "I decided to make a picture" is not really wrong, but I think it's more common to say "I decided to take a picture". Also, ""towns lying beside Moscow" sounds a bit weird, I would write "towns on the outskirts of Moscow" or "towns near Moscow". Keep it up! :)
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Today, I was renovating my new flat.There was a lot of snow outside, so I decided to take a picture. You can see the private sector from 17 floors up. There are a lot of tall buildings in Moscow, and towns on its outskirts.
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