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Tzu-Chun Hung
Which kinds of way you prefer to learn new knowledge ? The way of learning knowledge normally can distinguish from self-learning and taught by teachers . Both of this two ways have their pros and cons , yet in my opinion , I will prefer to learn the new knowledge with a teacher rather than learning by myself , so I will explain the reasons by following statements . First , learning a new knowledge with a teacher can be more efficient . Most teachers we have met in school are certificated by the government , so they not only have the concerned ability of education but the profession they got from the college . Why I have to mention this background ? That is because most students like me aren’t genius , it will be difficult and inefficient for us to learn completely unknown knowledge without teachers . In fact , teachers has already learned this knowledge for a while , so we can require better ways to comprehend and memorize the most important points through their guidance in different subjects . Finally it will improve our comprehension of this knowledge . Second , teachers can give some feedback for us during the learning process . In my opinion , the most efficient way for learning knowledge is to input the contents then output the product through your comprehension , and in the middle process we need to get some feedback from others because of some misunderstanding or incorrect application for the knowledge . Thus , teachers who regard as the lecturers teaching the knowledge has the ability and obligation to give feedback for students’ mistake . Through the feedback again and again , students can literally understand how to apply the knowledge in proper way . Admittedly, self-learning are more flexible for students to learn those knowledge which will be hardly taught by teachers in school , however , honestly it isn’t appropriate for all students . For my own experience , as a normal person I will prefer to learn with a teacher because I am not as clever as those genius , so I believe that most people around the world are not the special one who has extraordinary memorization and comprehension . For the normal self-learning will take more time and effort even reducing their passion of learning the knowledge , because they will face lots of frustration during the process , nobody can give them the solution to deal with the difficulty of the new challenge . Consequently , their confidence and passion will become collapsed after the persistent frustration and finally affect their learning .

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Which kinds of way you prefer to acquire new knowledge ?

The way of acquiring knowledge is normally by self-learning or being taught by teachers . Both of these two ways have their pros and cons. I prefer to learn new things with a teacher rather than learning by myself , so I will explain the reasons in the following statements .
First , learning a new knowledge with a teacher can be more efficient . Most teachers we have met in school are certificated by the government , so they not only have the concerned ability of education but the profession they got from the college . Why do I have to mention this background ? That is because most students like me aren’t a genius , it will be difficult and inefficient for us to learn a completely unknown thing without teachers . In fact , teachers has already learned this knowledge for a while , so we can require better ways to comprehend and memorize the most important points through their guidance in different subjects . Finally it will improve our comprehension of this topic.
Secondly , teachers can give some feedback for us during the learning process . In my opinion , the most efficient way for learning new things is to input the contents then output the product through your comprehension , and in the middle of the process we need to get some feedback from others because of some misunderstanding or incorrect application for the knowledge . Thus , teachers who regard as the lecturers teaching the knowledge has the ability and obligation to give feedback for students’ mistake . Through the feedback again and again , students can literally understand how to apply the knowledge in the proper way .
Admittedly, self-learning is more flexible for students to learn things which will be hardly taught by teachers in school , however , honestly it isn’t appropriate for all students . For my own experience , as a normal person I will prefer to learn with a teacher because I am not as clever as those genius , so I believe that most people around the world are not the special one who has extraordinary memorization and comprehension . For the most people self-learning will take more time and effort even reducing their passion of learning , because they will face lots of frustration during the process , nobody can give them the solution to deal with the difficulty of the new challenge . Consequently , their confidence and passion will become reduced after their persistent frustration and finally affect their learning .


Hello. There are quite a lot of problems with this piece of writing. I think I understand most of what you are trying to say, but not all. I have made some more corrections and have highlighted in pink some of the sentences that you need to write again. Perhaps you could try to write it all again? This time, make the sentences shorter and as simple as you can. The best, most natural English is written that way. I am sorry I can't give you more detail as I don't have a lot of time, but I hope that I have helped you in some way.
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This is a good start, though it needs some work. Firstly, we acquire (or gain) new knowledge or learn new things. We generally don't say learn knowledge. That sounds very odd to a native English speaker.

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