C2 Cambridge Official Examination Essay Hello, everyone! I was practicing writing an essay for C2 official Cambridge examination and I was wondering if you could give me your opinion. In the essay part you are supposed to read two texts and summarize both giving your opinion. I tried pasting both but they had too many characters so I'm going to put a link here so you can read them beforehand: https://www.flo-joe.co.uk/cpe/students/writing/makeover/makeover13.htm If you could correct my essay it would mean a lot! Let me know if there is something I should improve. Thank you for your time! MY ESSAY The food industry in the UK Throughout history, people’s relationship with food has being subject to changes mostly due to society’s internationalization. This essay deals with the question of the food industry in the UK, assessing and summarizing the ideas expressed in the texts above. The first text addresses the issue of the evolution of the culinary field. It is stated that the sector has now diversified offering a wide range of options in regards to accessibility to types of worldwide foods and ingredients. Nevertheless, the British population seem to prefer buying pre-made meals to making them themselves. Personally, I believe it’s positive that there are more possibilities to learn about new cultures and kinds of cuisine. However, it’s a shame that home-made cooking is being neglected in favour of buying foods already prepared. The second text discusses more in depth the last point mentioned in the first text: pre-cooked foods. The author highlights that its proliferation in the last years is probably due to the great variety, along with the inexpensive prices and the convenience of these products. Despite how positive it may seem, pre-cooked mea