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Escape from home This story started in France inside a peaceful town in France where lived a girl called Adeline.Her mother died when she was very young, and her father never lets her to go out alone. She never went to school because her dad doesn’t let her, but she was very clever and nice. The other children never played with her, so she don’t have any friends. Everything was good until one day the nazis killed her father and left with all there money. She had no idea what to do, but she decided to escape.When the town is getting dark and the sun is going down she put on her cape and ran away in sadness.

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Escape from home

This story started in France Inside a peaceful town in France there lived a girl called Adeline. Her mother died when she was very young, and her father never lets her to go out alone. She never went to school because her dad doesn’t didn't let her, but she was very clever and nice. The other children never played with her, so she don’t didn't have any friends. Everything was good until one day the Nazis killed her father and left with all there their money. She had no idea what to do, but she decided to escape. When the town is getting got dark and the sun is going went down she put on her cape and ran away in sadness.

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