My job in factory
Working in a cylinder factory was the worst job I ever had. First of all, the work was physically hard. My job was burning a long steel tube in a stove. When the end of the tube turns red, I’ll take it to the next step in the production line. This step will take me 2 minutes and I have to work 10 hours in a day. The second bad feature of the job was the working environment. When the sunshine through the hole in the workshop roof, you can see metal dust in it. The temperature was suffering, which almost 40 degrees in summer and negative 10 degrees in winter. Finally, the worst of all was the pay, for ten hours a workday I took $8 home. Well, it was 1999.
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My job in a factory
Working in a cylinder factory was the worst job I ever had. First of all, the work was physically hard. My job was burning a long steel tube in a stove. When the end of the tube turns red, I’ll take it to the next step in the production line. This step will take me 2 minutes and I have to work 10 hours in a day. The second bad feature of the job was the working environment. When the sun shined through the hole in the workshop roof, you can see metal dust in it. The temperature was oppressive suffering, which was almost 40 degrees in summer and negative 10 degrees in winter. Finally, the worst of all was the pay, for ten hours a workday I took $8 home. Well, it was 1999.
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My job in a factory
Working in a cylinder factory was the worst job I ever had. First of all, the work was physically hard. My job was burning (do you maybe mean "heating"? Burning usually means something is destroyed by fire) a long steel tube in a stove. When the end of the tube turneds (be sure to stay consistent in your tenses. I'll assume you want to tell this all in the past tense based on your earlier sentences) red, I’ll would take it to the next step in the production line. This step will would take me 2 minutes and I haved to work 10 hours in a day. The second bad feature of the job was the working environment. When the sun shined through the hole in the workshop roof, you can could see metal dust in it. The temperature was suffering (maybe pick a different word like "awful", using "suffering" here makes it sound like the temperature itself was experiencing pain), which almost 40 degrees in summer and negative 10 degrees in winter. Finally, the worst of all was the pay,; (a semicolon would be the most appropriate punctuation here, but I'd probably split it into two sentences instead) for ten hours a workday I took $8 home. Well, it was 1999.
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