About this year
Happy new year!
I'll change myself to make my life to the fullest this year.
I have two children. They are 2 years-old and 4 years-old.
Parenting is hard, I just don't have enough time for take care of my children.
So I wanna have more time to enjoy myself.
My resolutions are to study English, to work out and to start a hobby.
I have so many things I want to do.
Anyways, I wanna make myself grow as a person.
Let's make 2020 the best year ever!
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Thank you very much. Your explanation really helped!
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The sentences are pretty sound for the most part. The second one needs to be reworked. Also « wanna » is slang so it should be replaced with « want to ». You hear it spoken that way but should be avoided when writing. Good luck in the new year. Raising children is not easy and when they are young they need your time and attention. It is a good investment.
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