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One-day excursion in Zaragoza One day visiting Zaragoza Purposes of the trip On the 15th April, the Department of History prepared a one-day excursion for all students of Second Course. The purpose was visiting some famous roman ruins located in the city center, in particular the Roman Theater and the Roman Forum. Thus, we were going to see what we had been learned t in class the last month. What we did As our school is on the outskirts of the city, we had to take the bus in the direction of the city center. It was a bit chaotic because the group was quite large but it was quite funny, we laughed a lot. Once we got the city center we moved toward the Roman Theater. There was a monitor who explained us what was the Theatre like two hundred years ago and what the people did there. After that, we had lunch and then we went to the Roman Forum which had been a really business center in the Roman times. Eventually, we came back to our school where our parents were waiting us. Comments Visiting this sort of ruins might be a useful option to learn much more about the roman lifestyle. It is such an educational and fun activity, so it really worth it. Besides this, it is not as expensive as other kinds of activities such as going to another city or going to a thematic park. Actually, more consideration should be given to our own resources and places of interest, since there are many interesting plans and things to do in Zaragoza. One doesn’t have to look far. Finally, that kind of activity can be prepared in a short period of time, so it can be an advantage for teachers.

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A one day excursion to Zaragoza.

One day visiting Zaragoza

The purpose of the trip

On the 15th April, the Department of History prepared /arranged a one-day excursion for all students of the Second Course. The purpose was to visit some famous Roman ruins located in the city center, in particular the Roman Theater and the Roman Forum. Thus, we were going to see what we had been learned about in class the last month.

What we did.

As our school is on the outskirts of the city, we had to take the bus into the direction of the city center. It was a bit chaotic because the group was quite large but it was quite funny, we laughed a lot. Once we got the city center we moved toward the Roman Theater. There was a monitor /guide who explained to us what was the Theatre was like two hundred years ago and what the people did there. After that, we had lunch and then we went to the Roman Forum which had been a really business center in the Roman times. Eventually, we came went back ( or, returned) to our school where our parents were waiting for us.

Comments.

Visiting this these sort of ruins might be a useful option to learn much more about the roman lifestyle. It is such both an educational and fun activity, so it is really worth it. Besides this, it is not as expensive as other kinds of activities such as going to another city or going to a thematic park. Theme Park. Actually, more consideration should be given to our own resources and places of interest, since there are many interesting plans areas and things to do in Zaragoza. One doesn’t have to look far. Finally, that kind of activity can be prepared arranged in a short period of time, so it can this could be an advantage for teachers.
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One-day excursion trip in Zaragoza

One day visiting Zaragoza

Purposes of the trip

On April the 15th April, the Department of History prepared a one-day excursion trip for all the students of Second Course. The purpose was visiting some famous roman ruins located in the city center, in particular the Roman Theater and the Roman Forum. Thus, we were going to see what we had been learning learned t in class the last month.

What we did

As our school is on the outskirts of the city, we had to take the bus in the direction of the city center. It was a bit chaotic because the group was quite large but it was quite funny, we laughed a lot. Once we got to the city center we moved toward the Roman Theater. There was a monitor who explained us what was the Theatre like two hundred years ago and what the people did there. After that, we had lunch and then we went to the Roman Forum which had been a really business center in the Roman times. Eventually, we came back to our school where our parents were waiting for us.

Comments

Visiting this sort of ruins might be a useful option choice to learn much more about the roman lifestyle. It is such an educational and fun activity, so that it is really worth it. Besides this, it is not as expensive as other kinds of activities such as going to another city or going to a thematic park. Actually, more consideration should be given to our own resources and places of interest, since there are many interesting plans and things to do in Zaragoza. One doesn’t have There is no need to look further far. Finally, that kind of activity can be prepared in a short period of time, so it can be an advantage for teachers.
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One-day excursion in to Zaragoza

One day visiting Zaragoza (One day in Zaragoza / A one-day visit to Zaragoza)

The purposes of the trip

On the 15th April, the Department of History prepared a one-day excursion for all students of the Second Course. The purpose was visiting to visit some famous Roman ruins located in the city center, in particular the Roman Theater and the Roman Forum. Thus, we were going to see what we had been learned t in class the last month.

What we did

As our school is in the outskirts of the city, we had to take the bus in the direction of the city center. It was a bit chaotic because the group was quite large but it was quite funny, we laughed a lot. Once we got to the city center we moved toward the Roman Theater. There was a monitor guide (guía o guardia de seguridad del museo?) who explained us what was the Theatre was like two hundred years ago and what the people did there. After that, we had lunch and then we went to the Roman Forum which had been a really business center in the Roman times. Eventually, we came back to our school where our parents were waiting for us.

Comments

Visiting this sort of ruins (ruins like these) might be a useful option (way of learning) to learn much more about the Roman lifestyle. It is such an educational and fun activity, so it is really worth it. Besides this, it is not as expensive as other kinds of activities, such as going to an other city or going to a thematic park theme park. Actually, more consideration should be given to our own (natural?) resources and places of interest, since there are many interesting plans places and things to do in Zaragoza. One doesn’t have to look far. Finally, that kind of activity can be prepared organized in a short period of time, so it can be an advantage for teachers.

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