My first childhood memory
My first childhood memory is when I was about 2 years old and my father jast came back from the army. In Poland being in the army was obligatory at that time. So he came back and he tried to his best with carrying me. My father didn't know any lullaby as my mother, he was a soldier so I remember when he hold me in his arm and sang a very sad song called "My rosemary". It's a song about a boy who missed his love because of the war. When I listen this song it always remind me this scene from my childhood.
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My first childhood memory.
My first childhood memory is when I was about 2 years old and my father had just come back (or, returned) from the army. In Poland being in the army was obligatory at that time. So he came back and he tried to his best with carrying caring for me. My father didn't know any lullabies as like my mother. He was a soldier so but I remember when he held me in his arms and sang a very sad song called "My rosemary". It's a song about a boy who missed his love because of the war. When I listen to this song it always reminds me of that scene from my childhood.
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My First Childhood Memory
My first childhood memory is when I was about 2 years old and my father jast came had just come back from the army. In Poland being in the army was obligatory at that time. So he came back and he tried to his best with to carrying me. My father didn't know any lullaby as many lullabies as my mother, because he was a soldier. So I remember when he hold held me in his arms and sang a very sad song called "My Rosemary". It's a song about a boy who missed his love because of the war. When I listen this song it always reminds me of this scene from my childhood.
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