The Christmas is Gone Finally
I love the christmas but this year were everything too busy for me. This was the first time when I told to myself: Wow the chrismas is gone finally. It never has happend to me in my life before. Every thing started in my city where I live. The city was over crowded. The main streat was full of cars. It was problem to find some place to park. In the mall were the milion people around me and I had no idea what I would to buy for presents. In this case I alwas buy a stupid thing what nobody dont need. Like usaully. It was crazy time for me. I hate it! I wish me to spend the christmass differently next year.
But what I love about the chrismas is spending time with my family together. Sing the carolls and have fun. Next thing what I love about chrismas is smell of chrismas backing. I usaully decorate the chrismastree with the gingerbread it really fun and smells really good. One more thing what I make at the chrismastime is wreat for decorating outdoors and indoors. But what I really love about christmas is the children performance which is prepared from children at the schools. The performance is starting one week before the chrismass. For children is time to schow what they rehearse for this time. It makes the greatest christmass atmosphere in the air and you can be 100% sure that the chrismass is comming 😀. This means really christmass felling for me more than buying crappy things.
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Christmas is Gone Finally
I love Christmas, but this year, everything was too busy for me. This was the first time when I said to myself, "Wow, Christmas is finally gone!" This has never happened to me in my life before. Everything started in the city where I live. The city was over crowded. The main street was full of cars. It was even a problem to find a place to park. In the mall there were the million people around me and I had no idea what I wanted buy for presents. I always buy some stupid thing that nobody ever needs. Like usual, it was a crazy time for me. I hate it! I wish to spend Christmas differently next year.
But what I love about Christmas is spending time together with my family. Sing carols and have fun. Another thing I love about Christmas is smell of Christmas baking. I usually decorate the Christmas tree with gingerbread. It is really fun and smells really good, too! One more thing I make at Christmastime are wreathes for decorating both outdoors and indoors. But what I really love about Christmas are the children performances at the schools. The performances start one week before the Christmas. For children, it is time to show what they have been rehearsing for awhile. It makes the greatest Christmas atmosphere and you can be 100% sure that Christmas is coming 😀. This really means Christmas to me, more than buying crappy things.
Thank you for your correction!!!!!! and Happy New Year to everyone!!!!
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Christmas is finally gone.
I love the christmas but this year were everything too busy for me.
I love Christmas but this year everything was very busy for me.
It never has happend to me in my life before.
It has never happend to me before.
Every thing - Everything
Over crowded - Overcrowded.
In the mall were the milion people around me and I had no idea what I would to buy for presents. In this case I alwas buy a stupid thing what nobody dont need.
There were million people around me in the mall and I had no idea what I would buy for presents.
As always, I would buy something stupid not needed by anyone.
But what I love about the chrismas is spending time with my family together. Sing the carolls and have fun.
But what i love about Christmas is spending time with my family, singing carols and having fun.
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