Merry Christmas!
Ho ho ho! Merry Christmas! Today is my favorite holiday'' Christmas day'',though in my country people seldom celebrate Christmas , my school let us have a break. Almost all of my friends went to movie theater or department store to have fun.
I hope for a set of books ''Percy Jackson'' and some special pens. ''Percy Jackson'' is my favorite books.My family didn't set up the Christmas tree this year because of moving to another place to live, but I hope my gift will be right there tomorrow morning. I can't wait to read it!
If you read my small diary , I hope you can help me fix my poor English,thanks.
by Alexa
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Merry Christmas!
Ho ho ho! Merry Christmas! Today is my favorite holiday, Christmas Day. though In my country, though, people seldom celebrate Christmas, but my school let's us have a break. Almost all of my friends went to movie theater or department store to have fun.
I hope for a set of books ''Percy Jackson'' and some special pens. is My favorite books are "Percy Jackson''. My family didn't set up the Christmas tree this year because of we moved to another place to live, but I hope my gift will be right there tomorrow morning. I can't wait to read it!
If you read my small diary , I hope you can help me fix my poor English,thanks.
by Alexa
Merry Christmas, Alexa. My daughter likes to read Dork Diaries, but my wife likes the Percy Jackson series.
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