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Training It is sometimes argued that individuals' requisite abilities can not be gained through educational courses at a colleges or universities. I completely agree with this idea and in this essay I will support my opinion with examples. There are several reasons why I would argue that learning in universities cannot be productive in contemporary world. Firsty, the university curriculum usually is full with theorical subjects. furthermore necessary facilities have not offered which required for the applicatory courses. For example, I remember as an architecture student, there was not a laboratory in architecture faculty for concrete testing. As a result, the student connot gain any work experiences which are obligatory for job prospect. Secondly, although the technology is being grown, in majority of countries the lessons are being trained with a traditional educational system and this could lead to lack of their knowledge in modern world.

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It is sometimes argued that individuals' requisite abilities cannot be gained through educational courses at a colleges or universities. I completely agree with this idea and in this essay I will support my opinion with examples.
There are several reasons why I would argue that learning in universities cannot be productive in a contemporary world. Firstly, the university curriculum usually is full of with theoretical subjects. Furthermore, necessary facilities have not been offered which required for the applicatory applied courses. For example, I remember as an architecture student, there was no not a laboratory in the architecture faculty for concrete testing. As a result, the student cannot gain any work experiences which is are obligatory for job prospects. Secondly, although the technology is being grown, in a majority of countries the lessons are being trained taught with a traditional educational system and this could lead to a lack of their knowledge in the modern world.

Hi Morvarid, excellent writing! I've made some corrections for you above :)
Have a good day and keep up the good work!

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