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"Attacked by a bear" (task abstract) I read an text about two boys in English, the text was about, the boys that were in a forest walking on, the trail. And it was very quiet and a black bear appeared. They knew it was almost impossible to run away from a black bear, so they set out to hunt the hunters, play dead , and throw themselves on the ground. Although the black bear did not attack the humans, they acted differently twice around the two, and even attacked them with bites, but away from each other, they ran and entered a house. Soon after the bear arrives , but they were already safe.

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"Attacked by a bear" (task abstract)

I read an text in English[1] about two boys in English, The text was about, the boys that were in a forest walking on, a trail. And it was very quiet and a black bear appeared. They knew it was almost impossible to run away from a black bear, so they set out to hunt the hunters[2], play dead , and throw themselves on the ground. Although the black bear did not attack the humans, they(? [2]) acted differently twice around the two, and even attacked them with bites, but away from each other, they ran and entered a house. Soon after the bear arrives , but they were already safe.

Hi Carol,

[1] The text was in English, so it is more clear to put it here than at the end of the sentence.

[2] I am confused about who is acting differently. The boys? And who is doing the biting? The bear? The last sentence says the bear arrives, so the bear was not there before?

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very good! now please answer Kinho! he is here to help you!

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