My husband and I went to Mt. Broken to take pictures of steam locomotives.
My husband and I went to Mt. Broken to take pictures of steam locomotives. It was rained and foggy. At first we moved to Schierke by car. It was a halfway of the mountain. We parked the car there and went up Mt. Broken by steam locomotive. The tip of the mountain was windy、snowy and a heavy fog. We were not able to take pictures of trains very well. After we checked in the hotel at 2:30 in the afternoon. We stayed at the hotel. It was boring day.
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My husband and I went to Mt. Broken to take pictures of steam locomotives.
My husband and I went to Mt. Broken to take pictures of steam locomotives. It was rained and was foggy. At First we moved drove to Schierke by car. It was a halfway of the mountain (Not sure if you meant "We drove halfway *up* the mountain" or "We drove halfway *to* the mountain"). We parked the car there and went up Mt. Broken by steam locomotive. The tip of the mountain was windy、 , snowy and had (or "was under") a heavy fog. We were not able to take pictures of trains very well. After that, we checked in into the hotel at 2:30 in the afternoon. We stayed at the hotel. It was boring day.
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Bannoke,
Good job! I hope I become as fluent in Spanish and French as you are in English :)
Happy December to you,
Taylor-
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