Please help me check the sentences I acquired a thorough foundation in Materials Science and Engineering during my undergraduate studies at XXX, one of the top engineering universities according to the QS rankings of 2020. My cumulative GPA was XXX, and I gained two academic excellence scholarships. I developed a strong interest in materials science in a bachelor’s level course, “Introduction to Materials.” In this course, I acquired a comprehensive knowledge of materials science and I established an understanding of the relationship between the microstructure and the mechanical properties of the materials. Afterward, I gained further insight into specialized topics include Thermodynamics, Electron Diffraction, and Physical Metallurgy. The more I learned, the more I realized how profound and significant the materials science is, and I was inspired to pursue the knowledge of it further.