Cold moonlight
Don’t know what I’m going to write. Suddenly I just feel like very low energy. Moonlight in winter is bright but really cold. The sight at night in countryside is so quiet. Looking around a bit before going to bed, it pulls my energy even lower. Good night everyone
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Cold Moonlight
Don’t know what I’m going to write. Suddenly, I just feel like very low energy. Moonlight in winter is bright but really cold. The sight at of night in the countryside is so quiet peaceful/tranquil. [1] Looking around a bit before going to bed, it pulls {better: drains, saps} [2] my energy even lower further. Good night everyone.
- "Quiet" doesn't really have a visual element to it, so it doesn't quite work with "sight".
- To lose (a person's physical) energy, we usually say drain or sap.
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