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An essay for ILETS, is it appropriate?? While some people suffering from the lack of food and how to find their daily dishs, others unreasonably throw food away. Where is this habit coming from, and what we can do to quit its increasing. Here we are going to light on those points. Statistics show that the food which end in a bin remarkablely crept up. Personally analysing, there are two main reasons behind this phase. First factor is the increase of individual income average during the last decades from 500usd in sixties last decade to 5000usd nowadays. The second reason is wrongly Link between some bad habits and cases like people connect between modern and throw food away in their concious. It is only the same as when adults smoking to appear as matures. This popular habit need firstly a wareness from government of how much it cost society and awareness of its sequences. After that government should implement all ways to decreased people consciousness by giving them instructions how to manage their food stocks. Finally, food is something need to be grateful from, and deserve a thing of how to cope with it. So it need a movement .

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I'll tackle your first paragraph: While some people suffer from a lack of food or difficulty finding even a daily meal, others 'wantonly' throw food away. Where does this wasteful habit come from? What we can do to 'halt' its increase. Here we are going to 'shed' light on those questions (questions is better than 'points' as you have asked them).

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