The 335th day of 2019
It's Wednesday and these are my plans for today. I've already taken a shower but hadn't had breakfast yet. After writing this note I'm going to have some porridge. Then I will read a book for some time and go to work. After work, I will have dinner and go to my new apartment to decorate it. In the evening I will watch the TV-show Humans.
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The 335th day of 2019
It's Wednesday and these are my plans for today. I've already taken a shower but hadn't haven't had breakfast yet. After writing this note, I'm going to have some porridge. Then, I will read a book for some time and go to work. After work, I will have dinner and go to my new apartment to decorate it. In the evening, I will watch the TV-show Humans.
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Your paragraph would sound a lot better if you switched the first two sentences around! Right now, it sounds a little awkward because you say that you will talk about your plans, but instead, you talk about what you have already done. Other than that, good job!
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