Hi! I warmly welcome!
Hi! My name is Iwona. I'm 22 years old. I learning English languages, because I want to more earn. I'm an accountant. . I'm working at the French company. In the year I'm met a cool men. He is my boyfriend, now. I very like his, but I don't know will I love him. I very like to spend time with him. He is electrician. He is elder than me.
My favourite color is: yellow. This colors reminds me sunny. I hate cheating and bragging all.
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Hi! I warmly Welcome!
Hi! My name is Iwona. I'm 22 years old. I am learning English languages, because I want to more earn more money. I'm an accountant working at the a French company. In the This year I'm met a cool (wouldn't use cool, maybe 'good') men man. He is my boyfriend, now. I very like him his, but I don't know if will I love him. I very like to spend time with him. He is electrician. He is older elder than me.
My favourite color is: yellow. This colors reminds me of the sun sunny. I hate all cheating and bragging all.
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Hi! I warmly welcome!
Hi! My name is Iwona. I'm 22 years old. I am learning English languages, because I want to earn more. I'm an accountant. . I'm working at the a French company. In the this ( if you mean the current year) year I'm I've met a cool men man. He is my boyfriend, now. I very like his (I like him 'very/too' much/I like him a lot) , but I don't know will I love him. I very like to spend time with him. He is electrician. He is elder older than me.
My favourite color is: yellow. This colors reminds me sunny (you have to descripe something with 'sunny'). I hate both cheating and bragging all.
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Here are a few things that I noticed about your writing :) I am learning, the present continuous will need the verb 'to be' along with the verb +ing. You did a good job with this later (I'm working)! I like him (instead of his), but I don't know IF I will love him (or IF I will fall in love with him). I hope this helps a little!
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