First notebook entry: Introducing myself
my name is yangwenting.i like English very much.and i like making friends with foreigners.i want to chat with foreigners to improve my English.happy everyday!
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself
My name is yangwenting.I like English very much.And i like making friends with foreigners.I want to chat with foreigners to improve my English.I hope i can be your real friend who can take happiness to you !
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There are no mistakes in the wording of your introduction. The only mistakes are in punctuation. The first word in each sentence should start with a capital letter. We leave one blank space after a comma and two blank spaces after a period before we start another phrase or sentence.
"Happy everyday" is actually Chinglish. We usually say, "Have a nice day."
Very good!
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Your English writing is actually good. :)
The only thing that caught my attention was "Happy everyday!" What were you trying to say?
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