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Exhibition Could you correct my mistakes please? I'd like to share my experience at biennale in Florence comparing to art fair in Saint Petersburg. I was selected for participating in art fair during the open call. I was so happy with that because it was my dream to come there as a participant. This experience was nice but a little bit confusing due to lack of sales on my part. I was so exited to show people my artworks that lack of sales won't inhibit me applying to next year open call. After art fair I had to go to Florence for its biennale where I took part. I had been preparing for it for a year and a half. All time I felt stressed and needed to solve many problems related to my participating. I wanted this event to get over and continue working on my artworks further. At the biennale I had an interesting experience in communicating with people from all over the world and in having a feedback on my artworks. There people were more open with giving theirs opinion,thoughts on my painting. I was touched by that. At the art fair in Russia people were more closed and sometimes narrow-minded. I think they were somehow strucked by my works and just weren't interested so much. It was another kind of art event, where people should have fun and buy art at low price. So I seemed too serious with my art I suppose. The next year it will be another works,another experience,so I'm encouraged. Returning to biennale in Florence I'd like to say that I doubt to come back as a participant, but I surely come to Florence. Furthermore, since that time I have an art collector there and haven't visited many places yet.

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I'd like to share my experience at the Biennale in Florence compared to an art fair in Saint Petersburg. I was selected for participating to participate in the art fair during the an open call. I was so very happy with about that because it was my dream to come attend there as a participant. This experience was nice positive but a little bit confusing due to a lack of sales on my part. I was so exited to show people my artworks that this lack of sales won't inhibit me applying to for next year's open call. After the art fair I had to go to Florence for its Biennale where I also took part. I had been preparing for it this Biennale for a year and a half. All time I always felt stressed and needed to solve many problems related to my participating participation. I wanted this the event to get be over and so I could continue working on my artworks further. At the Biennale I had an interesting experience in communicating with people from all over the world and in having a receiving their feedback on my artworks. There, people were more open with to giving their s opinions and thoughts on my painting. I was touched by that. At the art fair in Russia, people's attitudes were more closed and sometimes narrow-minded. I think they were somehow struck ed by my works and but just weren't interested so much. It was another kind of art event, where people should have fun and buy art at low prices. So I may have seemed too serious with my art, I suppose. The next year it there will be an other works, and it will be another experience, so I'm encouraged. Returning to the Biennale in Florence, I'd like to say that I doubt to that I will come back as a participant, but I will definitely surely come return to Florence. Furthermore, since that time I have found an art collector there and haven't visited many other places yet.

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