Asking for internship opportunity . Is it appropriate??

Dear sir.

I am writing to you seeking for an internship term to build my experience with your brilliant team.I am 29. I graduated from (ESPI) Economic Social Planning Institution in Damascus Syria at late of 2018.My thesis was about good governance and its impact of banks in Syria. later I moved to Istanbul due to many reasons. the most important one is to complete my studying. And I realised that I have a lack in experience need to work on.in order to that I tried to applied to many Turkish company but I couldn't take consequently to my language,my native language is Arabik and I am good enough in English. however after I saw that you have a branch here I optimized that I might find my interesting.so I was wondering if you could help me with a term for practice only that's mean I don't want salary.

Thanks for you in advance .

Looking to hear from you soon.

I discovered that you have a branch here (where?) and would be most grateful if you would consider giving me an internship for a term.

Asking for internship opportunity . Is it appropriate??

Dear sir.

I am writing to you because I'd like to do an internship term to build my experience with your brilliant team.I am 29 years old, I graduated from (ESPI) Economic Social Planning Institution in Damascus Syria at late of 2018.My thesis was about good governance and its impact of banks in Syria. later some years I moved to Istanbul to many reasons. the most important one is to complete my studying. And I realised that I didn't have experience and I need to do some practise I tried to applied to many Turkish company but I didn't had any answers.My native language is Arabik and I am good enough in English. however after I saw that you have a brunch here, I was wondering if you could help me with a term for practice only that's mean I don't want salary.

Thanks for you in advance .

Looking to hear from you soon.

Dear sir,

I am writing to express interest in internship opportunities to build my experience with your brilliant team. I have graduated from (ESPI) Economic Social Planning Institution in Damascus Syria at late of 2018. My thesis was about good governance and its impact on banks in Syria.( Later, I moved to Istanbul due to many reasons. the most important one is to complete my studying. And I realised that I have a lack in experience need to work on.in order to that I tried to applied to many Turkish company but I couldn't take consequently to my language,my native language is Arabik and I am good enough in English. You need not mention all these I feel). I find your work on 'so and so work' (please do mention) to be very interesting and I would like to learn more from you. I have 'so and so qualities'(mention what makes you to qualify for this intership) . I am interested in this internship with/without pay. I am attaching my resume for your consideration ( attach resume if you have).

Thanks in advance. I look forward to hearing from you.

Regards,

Your name.

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