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Even though globalization affects the worlds economies in a positive way, its negative side should not be forgotten.
It is impossible to hide from globalization. It gradually gets into daily life through the media, culture and television. Consequently customs, individual’s behavior and lifestyle are changing. There are many advantages and disadvantages of globalization process. I intend to discuss both sides of these arguments.
On the positive side globalization gives us a lot of choices. With transporting goods to a long distance we can taste a variety of fruit and vegetables. For example approximately 10 years ago we hardly saw the kiwi fruit which is from New Zealand, but now it is available everywhere. Secondly, people can order foreign shoes and clothe brands like Nike, Reebocks, Adidas and they get employment in these companies or can be driver of trucks.
On the downside, globalization creates concerns for developing countries whose culture and economy unable withstand competition. Spreading the fast food brands in Asian market brakes own national foods and economy. For instance nowadays teenagers eat burgers, chip and drink carbonated drinks instead of healthy foods.
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Here are a few things I noticed about your writing: "By transporting goods..." instead of 'with'. 'Clothing brands' instead of 'clothe' and 'truck drivers' instead of driver of trucks'. Hope that helps!
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