Unforgettable Experience
Unforgettable experience
In short, it’s just something I did when I was a little kid, well, immature and naive.
Ok, now I think about it, I was not that little, first year in middle school, while my brother was a freshman in high school. He lived in a dorm, and he came back home once a month. One time,he was at home and then went out to take care of something else. So I was at home alone, and one of his classmates from highschool came to our house for help, since he came from the downtown by cab, but didn’t have any cash with him, he wanted to ask my brother to lend him some money. But I hadn’t met him before, so I didn’t recognize him. And it’s like so many years ago, we don’t have cellphones back then. Also, at that time, many terrible things happend in our village, there were some scammers tried to get money out of us, especially when the kids and the old were at home alone. So you can see how it goes...Also I have to say, my brother’s friend seemed like a creepy guy to me, he kind of had that look. So when he knocked on our door to ask for help, and ask for money, I immediately thought he was one of the bad guys, and refused him, no matter what he said ,how he know my brother, how badly he begged, I just don’t buy it. Finally he went away with no money.
When my brother went home later that day, I told him all about it, and expecting some praise from him, like how careful and smart I am to turn down a creepy guy. But instead of that, he got really bad at me. It turned out the creepy guy was his good friend, and he wouldn’t talk to me for a whole week……
He gets over it by now ,but back then he was just a high school student, what he cared about the most would be friends, and I ruined it. Sorry bro.
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Unforgettable experience
In short, this is just something I did when I was a little kid. Well, I was immature and naive.
Ok, now that I think about it, I was not that little. I was first year in middle school, while my brother was a freshman in high school. He lived in a dorm, and he used to come came back home once a month. One time Once, when he was at home, and then he went out to take care of something else. So I was stayed at home alone, and.
One of his classmates from highschool came to our house for help. Since he came from the downtown by cab, but didn’t have any cash with him, he wanted to ask my brother to lend him some money. But I hadn’t met him before, so I didn’t recognize him. And This happened like so many years ago, we didn't have cellphones back then. Also, at that time, many terrible things happend in our village, there were some scammers trying to get money out of us, especially when the kids or the old were at home alone.
So you can see how it goes...Also I have to say, my brother’s friend seemed like a creepy guy to me, he kind of had that look. So when he knocked on our door to ask for help, and ask for money, I immediately thought he was one of the bad guys, and refused him. No matter what he said, how well he knew my brother, how badly he begged, I just wouldn't buy it. Finally he went away with no money.
When my brother came home later that day, I told him all about it. I was expecting some praise from him, like how careful and smart I am to turn down a creepy guy. But instead of that, he got really mad at me. It turned out the creepy guy was his good friend, and my brother wouldn’t talk to me for a whole week……
He got over it by now, but back then he was just a high school student. What he cared about the most was his friends, and I ruined it. Sorry bro.
I think you did the right thing :)one tip: in English we usually separate sentences by dot (.) instead of comma + and (, and).
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