Please correct my sentences I’m thinking of go somewhere next holiday. I like traveling. Soon winter’s holiday come about 3 weeks. I must decide harry up. I wanna go somewhere.

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Please correct my sentences

I’m thinking of go going somewhere next holiday.

I like traveling. ~~Soon~~ The winter’s holiday ~~come~~ is about 3 weeks away. (OR The winter holiday comes in about 3 weeks.)

I must hurry up to decide ~~harry up~~.

I wanna go somewhere. wanna is spoken English slang, "want to" is for writing. Your choice!

I think this would be the most natural: I'm thinking of going somewhere next holiday. I like traveling, and the winter holiday's coming up soon so I have to hurry up and decide. I wanna go somewhere. Note: here "holiday's coming up soon" is a short form of "holiday is coming up soon": this is almost always how we say it here in the US.

Please correct my sentences

I’m thinking of going somewhere for my next holiday.

I like traveling and soon the Winter holiday period will be approaching in 3 weeks.

I must quickly decide where I want to go.

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