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My favorite holiday.
My favorite holiday is New Year. There are many footlights, ornamentations and Christmas trees on outside on the eve the New Year . I like to decorate my home and give presents to my relatives and friends. New year
is considered to be a family holiday in Russia. On the 31st of December family meet at the festive table and wish each other all the best.
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My favorite holiday.
My favorite holiday is New Years. There are many footlights, ornaments ations and Christmas trees on outside on the eve the New Year . (???) (Many decorations outside the houses?) I like to decorate my home and give presents to my relatives and friends. New year
is considered to be a family holiday in Russia. On the 31st of December families meet for a festive table meal and wish each other all the best.(good luck in the new year.)
Easy to understand, some small grammar changes, most of the changes are idioms. Good job!
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My Favorite Holiday. (with titles we tend to capitalize the first letter of each word. there are a few words that are exceptions)
My favorite holiday is New Year's. There are many lights, ornaments and Christmas trees outside on New Year's Eve. I like to decorate my home and give presents to my relatives and friends. (perfect!) New Year's is considered to be a family holiday in Russia (you can remove 'to be' if you want). On the 31st of December, families meet for a festive meal and wish each other the best.
Note: I left some things as Lydia had corrected. New Year's should have an apostrophe before the "s".
I think you did a wonderful job!
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