Family bonds
It is thought that many children are being taken care of by different relatives as their parents don’t have time enough to bring them up. According to this statement, it can be extremely positive to create strong bonds with other family members and share responsibilities.
Nowadays, it is fairly important to have an extended family for several reasons. For example, children might spend time with their grandparents when their parents have to work or they go through some hard moments. What is more, if they children are used to living with other relatives under any situation, they will be more willing to spend time together and will be look after them. On the contrary, if children have never been taken care of by one of their family members, they will feel uncomfortable and they will probably grow apart.
Furthermore, sharing pleasant experiences with their relatives can strengthen family bonds and the past experiences will be rewarding.
Finally, no matter how far away families live because there are a lot of networks that allow us to communicate with our close family. In addition to this, we can use social media and post details of our personal lives on them in order to keep in touch with our loved ones.
In conclusion, it is a challenge to share responsibilities between parents and other relatives with the intention of being aware of meaningful relationships. However, with the right attitude and making an effort we might consider our relationships as a learning opportunity.
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Family bonds
It is thought that many children are being taken care of by different relatives as their parents don’t have enough time enough to bring them up. According to this statement, it can be extremely beneficial positive to create strong bonds with other family members and share responsibilities.
Nowadays, it is fairly important to have an extended family for several reasons. For example, children might spend time with their grandparents when their parents have to work or when they go through some hard moments. What is more, if they their children are used to living with other relatives, under any situation, they will be more willing to spend time together, and they will be able to look after them.
On the contrary, if children have never been taken care of by one of their family members, they will feel uncomfortable and they will probably grow apart.
Furthermore, sharing pleasant experiences with their relatives can strengthen family bonds and the past shared experiences will be rewarding.
Finally, no matter how far away families live, we can still stay in touch because there are a lot of networks that allow us to communicate with our close family. In addition to this, we can use social media and post details of our personal lives on them in order to keep in touch with our loved ones.
In conclusion, it is a challenge to share responsibilities between parents and other relatives with the intention of being aware of meaningful relationships. However, with the right attitude and making an effort we might consider our relationships as a learning opportunity.
Well written, I have made some changes to improve the flow. Kind regards, Niall
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