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It is pretty significant to maintain the bio-diversity to keep the balance of the ecosystem. If one animal die out, the amount of its enemy are likely to grow up at a fast rate without the threat of the extinct animal. Then the growth would break the balance of the ecosystem. For instance, if there is an increase at rabbit quantity, which feeds on grass, it would possibly destroy the lawn and cause soil erosion.
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please help me with my essay
It is pretty very important to maintain the bio-diversity to keep the balance of the ecosystem. If one animal dies out, the amount population of its enemy is likely to grow up at a fast rate without the threat of the extinct animal. Then Consequently, the growth would break the balance of the ecosystem. For instance, if there is an increase at rabbit quantity in the rabbit population, which feeds on grass, it would possibly destroy the lawn grass and cause soil erosion.
*'pretty' is technically ok in the first sentence, but is used informal settings and not appropriate for an essay.
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