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Do you save money? Hello everybody ! can you help me correct this paragraph , it would be very handy . Thank you It´s widely believed that spend less money that you earn is the correct way to success in finances, but not always is possible, not because we can´t do it otherwise we haven´t develop a strict system to organize our income. however, I want to share with you some tips that can help you manage this aspect of your life. First. every time you receive month salary save at least 10% of it, this way you will abstain from buying useless things that you are use to it but you didn’t realize until you have saved the money. Second. we usually go to work by car or bus etc. but have you thought about ride bicycle? Bulk of cities have cycle paths and plenty of space to ride comfortable in the streets, this not only will reduce your transportation expenses but also get your desired fitness body. Another way to save money is write down daily every single expense you have; for example: lunch, a present for someone, clothes. After a week you will see how you are spending the money and depending on this make a budget prioritizing the basic needs, just left a little amount for unexpected circumstances . Looking at the arguments we would say knowing how do you spend the money and applying some easy strategies, this in the near future can help you balance your financial situation.

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Do you save money?

Hello everybody ! can you help me correct this paragraph , it would be very handy . Thank you
It´s widely believed that spending less money than you earn is the correct way to success in finances, but it is not always possible, not because we can´t do it, but because we haven´t developed a strict system to organize our income. however, I want to share with you some tips that can help you manage this aspect of your life.
First. every time you receive month salary save at least 10% of it, this way you will abstain from buying useless things like you are used to, but you didn’t purchase until you have saved the money.
Second. we usually go to work by car or bus etc. but have you thought about riding a bicycle? Most cities have cycle paths and plenty of space to ride comfortably in the streets, this not only will reduce your transportation expenses but also achieve your desired fitness.
Another way to save money is write down daily every single expense you have; for example: lunch, a present for someone, clothes. After a week you will see how you are spending the money and depending on this make a budget prioritizing the basic needs, just left a little amount for unexpected circumstances .
Looking at the arguments we would say knowing how do you spend the money and applying some easy strategies, this in the near future can help you balance your financial situation.

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