Life in Ventimiglia's family.
Today I'm going to talk a bit about my family.
In my family we are 4 people. I wish i could have more brother or sisters but that's it. Anyway I'm very lucky to have a brother. His name is Manfredi, he is 12 and he is a very smart, handsome and strong boy.Even if we argue many times I love him so much. Then there is my father, he is one of the most intellectual person I know, he studied so much during his life and he still continues to study. I will always admire his determination and his strenghth. My mother name is Ginevra and she loves Art History. Infact her job is to teach it. In reverse I hate Art History because I study it at school and I do not find anything interesting in it. In my family we don't have any pets but my neighbour Elena has two cats and one dog, so when she is not home I go to feed them and stay with them.
This was a little paragraph about my family:)
Tomorrow I'll write more, in the meanwhile if anyone can have a look at it and correct it I will be very grateful!!
thanksss
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Life in Ventimiglia's family.
Today I'm going to talk a bit about my family.
In my family we are 4 people there are four of us. I wish i could have more brothers or sisters but that's it. Anyway I'm very lucky to have a brother. His name is Manfredi, he is 12 and he is a very smart, handsome and strong boy. Even if we argue many times often or a lot might fit better I love him so much a lot or a great deal might fit better. Then there is my father, he is one of the most intellectual person people I know, he studied so much during his life and he still continues to study. I will always admire his determination and his strenghth. My mother's name is Ginevra and she loves Art History. In fact her job is to teach it. In reverse try in contrast or conversely I hate Art History because I study it at school and I do not find anything interesting in it. In my family we don't have any pets but my neighbour Elena has two cats and one dog, so when she is not home I go to feed them and stay with them.
This was a little paragraph about my family :)
Tomorrow I'll write more, in the meanwhile if anyone can have a look at it and correct it I will be very grateful!!
thanksss
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It's pretty well written, just a few small things! Some sentences technically make sense, but could be better phrased. Thank you for the corrections on my text, I took notes :)
p.s. No, unfortunately I'm not actually going to Venice. I hope to go to Italy next year, but I don't have any plans at the moment.
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