Celebity'ş role
The role of the celebrities in global aid organizations is sometimes questioned among people and there is no concensus on it. Some people support the idea of putting the famous one’s into the aid campaigns, whereas others are opposed to that. This essay will try to take a look into that debate and give the opinios of the writer in the conclusion.
According to the supporters of the celebrities in aid campaigns, the most important thing is to use the celebritie’s power to influencing the sociees and take their attention. While the celebrity has many followers, he/she can manage to motivate people to take action into the problems and collect huge amount of money in a very short time.
The opposer to the celebritie’s claim that the famous people may use such campaigns for their own interest- and advertisements. According to them, the celebritie’s followers are not really interested in the problems and after the end of the aid campaign, they may forget these poblems and return to their imaginary world.
I think the celebrtie’s role might be extravaganzzed and I don’t support to put them into the aid organizations. In 1980’s, there were LiveAid organizations. They were really very big and well-organized campaigns and aimed to helped African people who were suffering from hunger. During the campaign, societie’s attention and avereness were on the top but after it ended, the African were left alone, again. But the celebrities who took part on that campaign became more popular and wellknown.
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Celebity'ş role
The role of the celebrities in global aid organizations is sometimes questioned among people and there is no concensus on it. Some people support the idea of including celebrities putting the famous one’s into the aid campaigns, whereas others are opposed to that. This essay will try to take a look into that debate and give the opinions of the writer in the conclusion.
According to the supporters of the celebrities in aid campaigns, the most important thing is to use the celebrities’s power to influence ing society and capture take their attention. While the celebrity has many followers, he/she can manage to motivate people to take action into on the problems and collect a huge amount of money in a very short time.
The opponents of ser to the celebrities claim that the famous people may use such campaigns for their own interest- and advertisements. According to them, the celebrities’s (or celebrity's followers if you meant to talk about one celebrity) followers are not really interested in the problems and after the end of the aid campaign, they may forget these problems and return to their imaginary world.
I think the celebrtie’s (celebrities' for plural possessive, or celebrity's for singular possessive) role might be extravaganzzed (exaggerated?)and I don’t support to put them into the aid organizations. In the 1980’s, there were LiveAid organizations. They were really very big and well-organized campaigns and aimed to helped African people who were suffering from hunger. During the campaign, society’s attention and awareness were very high on the top but after it ended, the Africans were left alone, again. But the celebrities who took part in that campaign became more popular and famous.
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