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1. Your manager takes three day off, so you need to fill in for him for three days
2. His speech always not appropriate at the time.
3. I really don’t think his speech were very appropriate at the time
4. It’s well known that Jack don’t answer any message in weekend
5. His personality contributes to failure.
6. Is anyone want to contribute to our fund?
7. There’s increasing staff would ask raise salary.
8. It’s out of my expectation.
9. You can touch mass English word
10. Wait I’m digesting it, I can eat again
11. After discussed, they make unanimous decision.
12. He’ll undertake this program.
13. It’s hard to assimilate mass information in short time
14. The desire spurs me to save more money
15. It’s sensible that you bring umbrella before you head off.
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1. Your manager takes is taking three days off, so you need to fill in for him for three days
2. His speech always not is not always appropriate at the time. OR ... speech is not appropriate all the time.
3. I really don’t think his speech were was very appropriate at the time
4. It’s well known that Jack don’t doesn't answer any message in the weekend. OR ... on weekends. OR ... doesn't answer messages in the weekend. All three are good. Weird how "in" changes to "on" from singular to plural for weekend/s. :)
5. His personality contributes to failure. I am tempted to put "his" or "our" or "the" or "this" in front of "failure". But I think it is ok without change.
6. Is anyone wanting to contribute to our fund? OR Does anyone want to ...
7. There’s increasing staff would ask raise salary. Not sure of the meaning. Three guesses: There are an increasing number of staff asking for a salary raise. The increase in staff will raise the salary bill. (If we make then work harder then ...) There are more staff who would ask for a raise in salary. Note: "raise in salary" = "salary raise"
8. It’s out of my expectation.
9. You can touch mass English word. ??? I don't know what you're trying to say here. It isn't right, put it that way.
10. Wait I’m digesting it, (later) I can eat again. Your sentence isn't wrong, just hard to see it being used. Normally would be a word like "then" or "later" in the middle.
11. After the issue was discussed, they make an unanimous decision. OR After discussion, they make an unanimous decison. Make sounds weird, but could be correct. More likely, "made" would be used.
12. He’ll undertake this program. (I think that is correct for the US - program, here one would use programme.)
13. It’s hard to assimilate a mass of information in a short time
14. The desire spurs me to save more money
15. It’s sensible that you bring an umbrella before you head off.
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