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Congratulation letter Dear Ken, I am writing this letter to you propose congratulate you will been admitted to Beijing university . And I give you some suggestions as follows and how it can help you prepared for your new life in university. First of all , you should have a goal in your next four years .Such as after graduate you wil study master or go to work in the company etc . Do the plan list can help you make the goal became ture .What's more ,you should study hard and get more certificates . It will help you to finds a good job in the feture . Furthermore , find something what you like and join a club can help you met other people . You should make some good friends in your university life . Because it can improve your communication skill and make your life become happily .I think these tips can help you parpared you new life in university and hope you will like the gift that I have chose carefully for you . Your sincerely Alice

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Congratulation Letter

Dear Ken,

I am writing this letter to you propose to congratulate you will been on that you have been admitted to Beijing university and to give you some suggestions as follows and on how it can to help you yourself be prepared for your new life in university.
First of all, you should have a goal in your the next four years .Such as after graduate you wil study master studying for your Master's degree after graduation or go going to work in the a company etc . Do the A plan list list of plans can help you make the goal became come true. What's more, you should study hard and get more certificates . It will help you to finds find a good job in the future. Furthermore, find finding something what you like and join joining a club can help you met meet other people. You should make some good friends in your university life . because it can improve your communication skills and make your life become happily happier .I think those tips can help you be parpared for you your new life in university.
I hope you will like the gift that I have chosen carefully for you .
Yours sincerely
Alice

Alice, well done! Keep it up :)
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Congratulation letter

Dear Ken,

I am writing this letter to you propose congratulate you on achievement of getting into the will been admitted to Beijing university. And I will give you some suggestions as follows, and that how it can help you to be prepared for your new life in the university.
First of all, you should have a goal in your next four years .Such as, after graduate you wil once you have graduate from the university, you should study master or go to work in the company (or find a job in the company) etc. Do the plan list which can help you to make the goal come true became ture .What's more ,you should study hard and get more certificates. It will help you to finds a good job in the feture. Furthermore, find something what you like and join a club can help you meet other people. You should make some good friends in your university life. Because it can improve your communication skills and make your life become happier happily .I think these tips can help you to be prepared parpared you for new life in the university and hope you will like the gift that I have choose carefully for you.
Your sincerely
Alice

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