A picnic
It's sunday,I have a picnic with my good friend.We want go to the west hill.Who is my good friends?Oh! they are Jane.Mike Linda and Marra.I take some juice with me ,like apple juice .orange juice ,strawberry juice and watermelon juice .Jane likes to sing songs a lot .She takes her guiter with her.She sings some good songs for us .Mike's mother buys a big kite for him.He likes it very much ,So he flies a kite with Ann and HIs pet dog Bobby.I have to cook .Linda and Maria would likes to help me .They get some water for me .Then we have a good picnic .We are all very happy!
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A picnic
It's Sunday and I'm going to have a picnic with some good friends of mine.We want go to the west hill. Who are my good friends? Oh, they are Jane.Mike Linda and Marra. I'm taking some juices with me, like apple,orange,strawberry and watermelon juice .Jane likes singing a lot and she (always/often/sometimes,etc) brings her guitar.She can sing some good songs for us .Mike's mother bought a big kite for him. He likes it very much and he flies it with Ann and His pet dog Bobby. I have to cook and Linda and Maria would like to help me going to get me some water.Then we'll have a good picnic .We are all very happy!
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