How did i get in a hospital?
Today I am in a hospital.How did i get here? It is a long story.Yesterday i got out of the university from the lessons in the evening.It was very cold outside. I wanted to catch a taxi and one a luxury car stopped. At the wheel was a beautiful girl.She rolled down her window and asked me where do i need to go. I said my adress and she was glad to hear that. She said that is on her way and she can drop me off on the way for free. I agreed and got in the car. On the way we talked a lot. She said that she is celebrating her friend's birthday at the cafe and her phone is running out of batterey and forgot her charger at home. So she need to to take it because her husband is jelaous her. Then she asked me wait her for 10 min in the car because she wants to go home first. I agreed because i was not in a hurry so she stopped at her home and got out of the car.Her husband met her.He looked very angry.They were talking about something.Suddenly her husband hited her hard so she dell unconscious.Her husband screamed "it is all because of her friends then he noticed me. I was so scared.He took an axe.I managed to close the doors of the car.He screamed for me to open the door.And started breaking the window.He opened the door and I felt such pain that i woke up screaming.I had a fever. Now i am in the hospital.I have an angina.
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How did i get in a hospital?
Today I am in a hospital.How did i get here? It is a long story.Yesterday i got out of classes at the university from the lessons in the evening.It was very cold outside. I wanted to catch a taxi and one a luxury car stopped. At the wheel was a beautiful girl.She rolled down her window and asked me where do i needed to go. I told her said my adress address and she was glad to hear that. She said that is on her way and she would can drop me off on the way for free. I agreed and got in the car. On the way we talked a lot. She said that she is celebrating her friend's birthday at the cafe and her phone is running out of batterey battery and she forgot her charger at home. So she needed to to take it because her husband is jelaous jealous of her. Then she asked me to wait for her for 10 minutes in the car because she wants to go home first. I agreed because i was not in a hurry. so She stopped at her home and got out of the car.Her husband met her.He looked very angry.They were talking about something.Suddenly her husband hited hit her so hard that so she dell fell unconscious.Her husband screamed "it is all because of your her friends!". Then he noticed me. I was so scared.He grabbed took an axe and I managed to close the doors of the car. He screamed for me to open the door and started breaking the window.He opened the door and I felt such pain that i woke up screaming. I had a fever. Now i am in the hospital suffering with .I have an angina.
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Wow Laura, sounds like an interesting Tuesday. Good writing, I enjoyed the story. I would also change the title to: "How did I end up in the hospital?"
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How did i get in a hospital?
Today I am in a hospital. How did i get here? It is a long story. Yesterday I left university after evening lessons and it was very cold outside. I was trying to catch a taxi when a luxury car stopped. At the wheel was a beautiful girl. She rolled down her window and asked me where needed to go. I told them my address and she was glad to hear it. She said that it as on her way and she can drop me off for free. I agreed and got in the car. On the way we talked a lot. She said that she was celebrating her friend's birthday at the cafe, her phone was running out of battery and she forgot her charger at home. She needed to take it back because her husband is jealous. She then asked me to wait in the car for ten minutes because she wanted to return home first. I agreed because I was not in a hurry so she stopped at her house and got out of the car. Her husband met her. He looked very angry. They were talking about something.Suddenly her husband hit her hard so she fell unconscious. Her husband screamed "it is all because of your friends", then he noticed me. I was so scared because he had an axe. I managed to close the doors of the car. He screamed for me to open the door and started breaking the window. He opened the door and I felt such pain that i woke up screaming with a fever. Now i am in the hospital with an angina.
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