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Email.. Hello everybody... I'm practicing my writing so I tryed to write a formal email. Someone can correct it ? Thanks in advance.. Dear... I am writing you to information about the issue detected on credential cards. Ours technicals tryed to fix the issue but they can’t do it. So is necessary bring the printer to White Lion’s office to repair it and to do effective the guarantee Tomorrow my partner is going your office with the Authorization. Is necessary you signed the Authorization to personal of security allows extract the printer. I know the work can’t stop so I engaged send you another printer instead of it. You’ll get it Friday 22th. Best regards.

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Hello Jorge, here's my 2 cents ( I am not sure if I understood what exactly will happen, let me know if I misunderstood something). Also, I am not quite sure what you meant by “credential cards”, I assumed “ID cards”.


Dear Ms./Mr.

I am writing to you in order to inform you about the issue detected with the id cards. Our technicians tried to fix the issue but they weren't able to do it. Therefore it's necessary to bring the printer to White Lion’s office while the warranty is still in effect. Tomorrow my partner is going to your office with the authorization document. It's necessary that you sign it in order to allow security staff to take out the printer.

I know the work can’t stop so I'll make sure that I send you a replacement printer while we're fixing the one with the problem. You’ll get the repaired printer by Friday the 22th.

Best regards.

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