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Good evening, please correct me I read an article about vape, the article talk about vape in the US , UK and france whose make the most of vape products, the US investigators think that vape sicknesses come from vape products that have THC. those products affected more than 1000 people and killed over 2 dozen people in the US. the US panned all the vape products that have THC.

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Good evening, please correct me

I read an article about vape, the article talk about vape in the US , UK and france whose make the most of vape products, the US investigators think that vape sicknesses come from vape products that have THC.
those products affected more than 1000 people and killed over 2 dozen people in the US.
the US panned all the vape products that have THC.

I read an article about vaping. It mentioned vaping in the US, UK and France where most of the vaping products are made. US investigators think that illnesses are caused by the products that have THC. These products have affected more than a thousand people and killed over two dozen in the US. The US has banned all the vape products that have/contain THC.
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Hello! Your text was pretty good, and understandable to read. Hopefully this will help a little bit.

I read an article about vape vaping. The article talked about vape vaping in the US , UK and France, whose which make the most of vape most of the products. the US investigators think that vape sicknesses vaping illness come comes from vape vaping products that have THC.
those These (to bring the reader closer to the text and immerse them) products affected have affected more than 1000 people and killed over 2 dozen people in the US.
the US panned all the vape products that have THC.

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