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Could you please correct me? George and Lana will supply me with the new images on monday but anyway today I will try to send you the test version of the video from the images I had Please can you help me to make this sound more natural?

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Could you please correct me?

George and Lana will supply me with the new images on monday Monday, [1] but, anyway, [2] today I will try to send you the test version of the video from the images I had I will try to send you the test version of the images' video today. [3]

Please can you help me to make this sound more natural?

Suggested result:

George and Lana will supply me with the new images Monday, but I will try to send you the test version of the images' video today.


Correction notes:

[1]: Monday is capitalized. Also, we add a comma before "but" because the sentence "George and Lana will supply me with the new images on Monday" is complete. Also, "on Monday" can just be shortened to "Monday."
[2]: Commas added because of how "anyway" sounds like an interjection to me. "Hey, I want to, but, anyway, I gotta go. It's more important." You should just delete "anyway" as well. It sounds more professional to just delete the word so that you will not worry about the commas.
[3]: I use this sentence because it sounds smoother. Some explanations: "The images I had." In this, "I had" is deleted because, I wonder, how else could he send such a video if he did not have the images? "of the video from the images" I take this to mean "The images' video," which means "The video associated with these images." "The images' video" is natural sounding. "Today" is placed at the end of the sentence so that it sounds smooth, too.

today I will try to send you a test version of the images' video.

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