First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hey you,_you who is are passing by and reading my self-introduction at present. I enjoy the feeling when I use English,_it is so different of to Chinese,_but so amazing._Yes I like English,_just like Chinese,_French,_Spanish,_Russian……I like all the beautiful languages in of the world._So strange that there's there was only one option when I was asked to fill in the blank "the language you want to learn".

Your English seems to be very good, but your punctuation less so. You must always put a space after every comma and full stop. This is not optional, it's obligatory! :)

I like Chinese,English,French……I like all the beautiful languages in the world.

Hey you,who is passing by and reading my self-introduction at present.
I enjoy the feeling when I use English,it is so different of Chinese,but so amazing.Yes I like English,just like Chinese,French,Spanish,Russian……I like all the beautiful laguages in the world.

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hey you,who is passing by and reading my self-introduction at present.
I enjoy the feeling when I use English,it is so different with Chinese,but so amazing.Yes I like English,just like Chinese,French,Spanish,Russian……I like all the beautiful laguages in the world.So strange that there's only one option when I was asked to fill in the blank "the language you want to learn".