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What happened yesterday.(My son loves singing the song) Hi, this is my first time to write a notebook. I picked up my kids at bus stop after school yesterday. I saw my oldest boy who wore a new T-shirt. So I asked him where did you get a new one. He said I got it from school and this is a uniform for the performance of a choir. He loves singing the song, so he is joining a choir this year. This Tuesday, he had a fall feeder festival at the Highlands Ranch High School. I was so proud of him. When I was in the elementary school, I loved singing the song and practiced it everyday. Sometimes I sung the song in front of people at school. I was really nervous of it but it made me grown up. He said he was nervous but it was fun. I think he looks like me. From time to time, he said he wants to be a singer after to be a baseball player. I hope he makes dreams come true. And I try to help him get his dreams next to him. Thank you for reading it. Have a good day.^^

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What happened yesterday.(My son loves singing the song)

Hi, this is my first time to write a notebook.

I picked up my kids at the bus stop after school yesterday.
I saw my oldest boy, and he was wearing who wore a new T-shirt.
So I asked him, "Where did you get a new one?"
He said I got it from school, and this is a uniform for a choir performance.
He loves singing the song, so he is joining a choir this year.
This Tuesday, he had a fall [feeder?] festival at the Highlands Ranch High School.
I was so proud of him.
When I was in the elementary school,
I loved singing the song and practiced it everyday.
Sometimes I sang the song in front of people at school.
I was really stressed by it, but it made me grown up.
He said he was nervous, but that it was fun (or "but that he had fun.")
I think he looks like me. (or "He reminds me of myself.")
From time to time, he said he wants to be a singer after he has become to be a baseball player. (or "From time to time, he tells me he would like to be a singer after being a baseball player.")
I hope he makes his dreams come true, and I will try to help him bring his dreams closer.

Thank you for reading it.

Have a good day.^^

well done! that's so sweet.
-Sarah

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